Film Language test: Learner Response

WWW: You've picked out some important aspects such as eye-line match (or lack of them) and attempted to used media terminology through out. Plenty to build on here.

EBI: Written English is a massive problem. Pretty every apostrophe is wrong almost every use of terminology is spelt wrong. You must simply must write clearly and spell correctly when studying at A level.

- In term of media analysis, you need a let more in depth in terms of what is being communicated to the audience.

-Editing is a weakness and needs revising there are no jump cuts.

How is editing used to create Drama and Tension in the opening scene ?
In this opening scene the editing helps build up a the tension by cutting the main shot of the killers face and this has a very big impact on the audience which is also a enigma code that built the suspensions. Therefore, we did not make much relationship between the killer as his face was not shown which did not only build suspense it also made it a mystery because being apart and not being aware of who the killer is the audience will feel left out and also unaware of who the killer is right from the start which makes it that one bit more dramatic when the action code occurs. Therefore because of the lack of eye-line match it makes the continuity of the editing of the opening scene more tensed.

Secondly, the slow paced editing is helps build up the tension also as the pace builds the intensity of the actual scene of the opening scene and the fact you don't see the man in the trench coats face means it make's that tension build up. In addition to this the pace of the editing of this opening scene as pace is one of the most powerful use of editing it helps the killer make the dominate character look more powerful as the camera angle is being placed low to the ground and looking up at him this helps with the slow paced editing which gives it that edge as this built up the tension also as it is very slow paced which helped with enigma codes.

Finally, the last scene of the whole ship blowing up with the drop of the cigarette on to the petrol which re-lit the fire as the fire begun again it help build that action code once the ships blows up and also increasing the devastation for the main character who is has been put out by the relentlessly unknown charter who face has still been kept out of shot, this all helped build up to the eruption of the ship which was slow which created tension for audience and gave them the indication that the character that has been given a more identification and a relationship with the audience has been perished and then followed by after with the split second of orange flames built the drama and emotive feelings.